Sunday, July 29, 2007

Chapter XXIV

Silence fell. Zoe watched Brysa closely, wondering what she would do. Brysa’s hands fluttered at her sides convulsively. The princess’s face grew whiter and whiter. Zoe wondered what was wrong—and then realized Brysa was panicking.

Zoe stepped forward. “Stay where you are,” she said in a half-commanding, half-calming voice. Hardly knowing what she was doing, she strode to the door and nudged Rebekka out of the way. She peered through the crack in the door. Sure enough, Jaquin and a couple of bodyguards stood there. “Princess Alustate is unavailable,” Zoe told the prince bluntly. “Did you not hear she is feeling unwell?”

Jaquin’s face twisted with ill-humor. “I’m not in the mood for jesting, wench. Move aside.”

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I'm not sure I really like this chapter, so please come and let me know what YOU think. Thanks!

Wednesday, July 25, 2007

battle

Taerith jumped away from the swing of the tattooed man’s sword, seeing as he did so that others were closing in around him. Kardas’s cry split the air, but he too was hard pressed.

Around them still, the darkness raged.


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And Chapter 19 of Taerith is up :). Chapters should be coming once a week from now on, so keep up!



Wednesday, July 18, 2007

prophecies

The last tongue of fire sank into the kindling and burned itself out. A few glowing embers were all that still lit the gloom of the fading day. The men seemed to wane in the shadows even as they faced one another.

“I don’t know what to do now,” Kardas said. “I do not wish to carry out my orders.”

“Perhaps,” Joachim said, smiling again, “I should spare you the agony of decision.”


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Chapter 18 of Taerith hath been posted. Read, comment, and I thank you.

Tuesday, July 17, 2007

An Toan

Chapter Seven of Arnan is finally posted!

Come, Read, Comment... Waiting to hear what you think of it!

Wednesday, July 11, 2007

aftermath

Chapter Seventeen of Taerith is up. Thanks in advance for your comments ;).

Tuesday, July 10, 2007

Uncertainty

"Am I doing the right thing? What is he doing now? Does he know that I have left or is he still gone? Could he be dead by unforeseen circumstances and I am out here running for nothing? Is he hurt and alone somewhere? Does he still love me? Did he find some other woman who could give her love to him and did he totally take me out of the picture? Do I want out of the picture?"

Chapter 8 is up on Aquila!

More Conflict

Chapter 23 of Zoe is up for your perusal! Please come and tell me what you think.

Tuesday, July 03, 2007

The Woman unearthed!

Find out who the Woman truly is and read chapter 7!

Monday, July 02, 2007

updated chapter 6

Some minor changes have been done on Aquila's chapter 6. It doesn't make much difference but hopefully what difference it does make is a good one.