A battle, a death, and the beginning of the end

Chapter XXIII is up. Only one chapter to go, I think. Come and enjoy the excitement.

Excerpt from Wren's part of the chapter:

Within moments Svhen, myself and our eleven companions were standing between two forces intent on battle. Only the lack of a signal held their fervor at bay.

Excerpt from Tourth's portion:

A second falcon, this one the white female, dove and attacked, carrying away a leather helmet and effectively clearing men from the central battle. I spotted Wren’s dark head for the first time.


She went down on one knee, clutching her side.

Her opponent lifted his sword.

Come, read, and comment. Be sure to look for the feedback questions at the end of the chapter. I am eager to hear what you think.
 
- Rachel Rossano
Author of Wren Romany's story